Desperate Phone Call
by melismatica

Comment:
The elements came together just right in your composition - text and font perfect, retro phone works -- one of the best this challenge.

DPC - Demerging Personality Conflict
by kiwiness

Comment:
Your model got the expression just right - I can see it being used to advertise the band. I like the font and placement. One of the best this challenge

Dead Presidents Choir
by spydr

Comment:
This is so well done - the band title works, simple photo highlights the band (as it should) the "R" is a creative touch, text font and placement excellent. One of my ribbon picks

Delinquent Public Children
by bobdaveant

Comment:
The expression on each model is too good. The font works - phrasing of the band name's a bit awkward -- still one of my top picks this challenge -- good luck

Dinner Party Cocktails
by EddyG

Comment:
I like the blurring behind the text and the photo goes great - one of the best this challenge

Dress Parade Club
by Paulk

Comment:
One of my favorites this challenge - photograph is eye catching.

Dark Pier Creek
by hopper

Comment:
One of the best this challenge, lighting and placement of text is superb

Delirious Puppet Crew
by aznym

Comment:
One of my ribbon picks (I like everything about this except the font for the band's title -- clever picture is just icing on the cake) I can see this as an album cover. Well done

the Dill Pickle Club
by jjbeguin

Comment:
One of my ribbon picks -- you got this just right (composition, b&w, title, text) well done.

Chocolate Attraction
by melismatica

Comment:
Hi Melissa:

Greeting from the Critique Club -- hello to a fellow member -- the pressure's on me to offer as good a critique as you do :)

It seems by the few comments that you've fallen into the "average score" category here. You meet the challenge and there is a good technical quality to your shot.

What strikes me first about your shot is that each element has a different color and there is no unifying element or main element to pull the composition together - it's as if each (the chocolate, strawberry, background, wings, bug body, and leaves) all take the same weight in the shot and in a way compete for my attention.

Compositionally, you have only one two items but they are bundled so tightly together that the composition doesn't allow me to explore the frame.

If you have any questions or comments, please pm me. I've enjoyed looking at your photographs and wish you lots of good shooting!

Regards,
Theresa