Target practice
by graphicfunk

Comment:
i like when i get an emotion from a pic. this one really makes me uneasy, not just the gun, but the close range shot like you're placing it up against someone's head. the mixed signal provided by the coke can is extremely intriguing. I would have thought the more natural target to be a bud can. but upon further reflection the feeling of a caffeen overdose adds to the tension. very interesting, though i wouldn't hang it on my wall.

Class of 2005
by RickH

Comment:
clever idea, good focus. the composition just feels a bit to chaotic to be able to make it fully work.

On the lake
by BigR

Comment:
good leading line. it's shadow is a bit distracting. i'm wondering if you could have improved the look and lessening of the shadow by centering the pier. the rule of thirds would still apply to the focus point. another possible adjustment to make it easier on the eye might be to lower your point of view so the end of the pier merges with the horizon

Balmaha Boat
by muggle_girl

Comment:
i wouldn't be afraid to up your contrast a bunch more. i hope you continue to learn psp. i feel bringing the trees to black and upping the contrast on the boat through dodging and burning so you really highlight the light you have on the bow, would really make this shot catch people's attention.

Sunny side of the street
by bpickard

Comment:
i'm liking your composition. i would have gone with stronger contrast. possibly blackening everything on the right except the car in the middle. i realize you would lose the street line but i think it just competes with the shadow line anyway. now you have this light vs dark, good vs evil thing working with the church.

Healthy Bite
by muggle_girl

Comment:
super crisp. would have liked to see it w/o the juice, or maybe more uniform juice.

Heading Home
by davidbedard

Comment:
nice composition. like how you've chosen to include the other pier to help direct things. good contrast under tough lighting

Banshee in the Basement
by jenesis

Comment:
very unique and intriguing. as is, the light on the top keeps drawing me away from the figure. it looks good, but i think it might look better cropped down or up and inch. don't mind me, i shouldn't be critiquing your art.

stone by stone
by JohannesFrank

Comment:
beautiful...really like how the sidewalk tiles strengthen the idea. the red and green in the background add a ton of interest at the destination.

Revenge On Authority ... Got A Match ?
by Coley

Comment:
nice expression on the nun....perhaps that's real pain. I'm trying to conceive a way to get my gma to lie on the train tracks for a photo op....ummmm nope, can't seem to do it. As far as leading into the pic, I'm guessing, placing the girls further down the line just lost the point.