Goodbye world.
by Geocide

Comment:
Comments from Grayce for the Critique Club
This is a good composition. The strong diagonal forming from the paper and arm leads the eye right to the pills. From the other direction, the pill bottle does the same thing. Very good use of diagonals on both counts.
The exposure is very good, except for the glare of the flame. It's over-exposed, which is a pity, because the candle isn't even an important element to the picture. It COULD work but would need to be toned down.
This is an emotional theme and you did a good job of portraying that.
That little bright line up on top near the candle serves no purpose and is a distraction.
As others have mentioned, the pills definetly look like vitamins.
Overall this is an effective image, and fairly well done.
Best of luck in all your photographic endeavors.
Regards,

Grayce

Too Far Down
by welcher

Comment:
Quite powerful. Good lighting and composition.

more?
by Pep Ventosa

Comment:
Strong graphical image. I don't necessarily see the despair, since death is a natural part of life, just part of the cycle. I mean I know death has the sting of separation from loved ones, but I think your real strength here is the lines, and pattern of the headstones. Good!

The Weakest Link
by rmahan

Comment:
Very, very good concept, and well done. The shadow really confirms the concept.

living in a world without green
by GinaRothfels

Comment:
Good composition. The concept is very good too, and well executed.

Fly Fishing - Yellow Elk Hair Caddis
by justine

Comment:
Nice job! Good, vivid details on the subject.

Chinese Riddles: Do Not Despair!
by bioshore

Comment:
Ohhh geee...I'm trying to understand, but I don't get it. I love the colors though. Good luck! :-)

Storms Coming
by boyte1

Comment:
Increase the contrast on this and it would really pop. I can feel the despair here.

'dis pear'..is very very sad
by camelotnorth

Comment:
Very funny! Quite unexpected in this challenge. The element of surprise works well. The problem I see is the glare between the mouth and eye. I still like this though. Very imaginative!!!

Crumbling World
by jodiecoston

Comment:
Good concept image, vivid coloring.