Mercedes Benz in WCC
by juggernog

Comment:
I think you should remove the date. Also its oof and it would probably be nice if it were straighted a little bit - unless you were going for an abstrat look

The Hinge
by cryan

Comment:
maybe a needs a little more contrast?

Do you need some Pixy Dust ?
by svava

Comment:
Your daughter is indeed a beautiful girl. Makes you a lucky photographer to have such a model on call ;-)

Do you need some Pixy Dust ?
by svava

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club

First Impressions:

The first thing that graps my attention are those eyelashes! From there I see the eyes, then on the blowing of the pixie dust. I think it's a good draw; very pretty model.

Technical (Comp, lighting, color, focus):

Good composition. I like that you've basically filled the frame. The focus is nice and sharp, except there on her fingertips which is of course exactly as you want it. The lighting is good, not harsh, not too dark. You stated it's a studio shot and you obviously know how to handle lighting. The comment about the pixie dust (below) is spot on.

Challenge:

I think it meets the challenge; but may be a stretch without the title

Artistic/Emotion:

Artisticly this is a pretty straight forward shot; not overly artsy.
It doesn't pull any emotion from me good or bad.

Summary:

All in all this is a well done studio shot. But it really doesn't push me one way or another as far as a WOW or an UGH.

Pirate Radio!
by Agust-Ingvarsson

Comment:

Greeting from the Critique Club!

I like this image because it adds some humor to the challenge.
Another thing that stirkes me in images such as this is the time that goes into setting everything up.
You did a good job with your lighting although the little parrot is almost lost - could have used just a bit more light on it.
The set up is good with just the right about of other objects, the coffe cup, the pencil and the triangle....they all add to the effect you were going for without going overboard.

Overall a good idea and a good shot.
I just think the members were looking for more of the "Ahoy matey" theme in this challenge.

Lucille

A-Maze-ing Colorful Corn
by Dennisheckman

Comment:
BEAUTIFUL!!!! You get a BLUE from me!

secret garden
by ashepp

Comment:
I like this alot! I think some improvements could be made - please keep in mind this is just my opinion. A crop, some exposure and saturation adjustments and this would have been a great photo. The colors are marvelous. You have a really good eye to have spotted this!

*electric* rainbow sprinkles, Jack...
by david_c

Comment:
that's a scary shadow there in the background

The Queen advances...
by theluissales

Comment:
although it looks just a tad bit tilted I think this a wonderful shot - beautiful dof!

After the rain
by Paul

Comment:
This is beautiful!