The Ascent
by odriew

Comment:
IMHO - it needs more conterast to pop

Tilted Triplet
by sekarmalathy

Comment:
Very nice. I'm going to be picky - there is a small buldge of blue water above the rest and its distracting 9.

Tiny Toes
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment:
Love the photo - not seeing the tilted (the rings don't have enough tilt impact for me)

Slurp
by peter

Comment:
Lovely shot - but watch the dust on the mirror! :) 8

Cymidium
by sarsonuk

Comment:
I love your choice of subject for the photo. However, there are 3 recomendations I would like to give you. 1) Isolate the flower from the background, ether by having it sitting off the material or closely cropping the photo/zoom in 2) Play with your depth of feild - more of the cymidium should be in focus - but make it a focal point. 3)The flash needs to be defused (bounce it of a large piece of card) so you reduce the shadows and or through paper (tisue/grease proof)

squiggle
by disassociation

Comment:
I should have guest that you had used the flash to freez the model (or an even longer exposure)! It would have been nice to see the models face and the white light is to bright for me. Perhaps use a coloured jell to give more interest.

A Window on Easy Street
by pixelpig

Comment:
I can't see anything to hold my eyes attention. The shading is interesting, but with out the focal point it looses me.

Uummmm...yeah
by Kelli

Comment:
Sorry to many blown out highlights to see what is suposed to be there.
I wonder if you changed you Ev value to make it blur? (this would cause it) You need to increase your exposure time and decrease ISO/increase fSTOP to ensure thiungs don't over expose (persumeing your on manual)

Speed Dusting
by wkdesigns

Comment:
I like the motion, but where is the dust/spray (I was expecting it from the title)?

"Apple core" - a painter's perspective
by burtct

Comment:
Very suttle. I would have liked to see a warmer light sourse on the right.