Back to the past
by ionelpop

Comment:
good timing on the shot. I thinking you needed a faster shutter as her face is a little bit blurred. Maybe even pump the ISO to get it.

É Carnaval, Vamos Dançar!
by scarbrd

Comment:
wow what beautiful dancers. I would have used a shallower depth of field so that fence in the back ground is not as prominent.

little dancers
by Lelez

Comment:
nice capture. It would have been nice if you did not have the lady with a skirt in the top of frame. Perhaps try to time if to get both of the girls faces or change position.

Take a hold of my heart and with my wings I will soar
by Judi

Comment:
nice shot. Some more lighting on your model would have helped unless you were going for a silhouettes in which case you needed a faster shutter.

by yanko

Comment:
great shot I want love the depth of field and the job you did with the lighting. I think that the laptop looks out of place compared to everything and I would have removed it and put something else there so its not just an empty table. I would have also taken the vase on the left of shot away.

freshly squeezed
by Lutchenko

Comment:
really dig the conversion and the orange popping. Two small observations, one I would remove that tuft of hair on the top of the models head. Two I would have got the model to just undo that shoulder strap to have a nice clean shoulder.

Searching
by ChikaZAWa

Comment:
Really dig the clouds here. Might have been worth trying to get a little bit lower so you don't have so much of the boring layer of clouds.

by Mephisto

Comment:
wow film huh goes to show don't need the latest bells and whistles on a camera to get a great shot. I would have considered cropping the top by about a centimetre (1/3 an inch). Also you have some lines going across the shot are they from the processing?

Chloe
by jomari

Comment:
Lovely shot of your daughter/granddaughter. I think you may want to go around her with a soft brush so that the edges are not as sharp as they are and remove the white halo. Try sharpening the hair if possible and remove the one or two stray hairs. You did a great job with the skin though you might want to slightly whiten the teeth for the hollywood smile. I am sure she would have loved you to take another with a nice smile but I think its a nice candid.

Returning To Class
by gsal

Comment:
love your depth of field here, just enough to single out the girl but you can still make out the story of what is happening in the back ground. Any parent would love to have a shot like this of their kids heading to school. The only thing I can think of that you might want to look at is to crop a bit more of the top of frame off.