Sky Puppets
by jefftoews9

Comment by NikonJeb:
I'm going for 100% comments, so here goes......bear in mind I am trying to be constructive. Basically a good concept, but IMO the "puppets" would have been a better concept had you found some kind of people or critter kites. The image is a little washed/overexposed, and the focus is too soft. I hope you find this helpful.

Sky Puppets
by jefftoews9

Comment by bluefish:
I like your creative interpretation! Kites are like puppets on strings! I think I would have liked to see more of the standing subject's shadow rather than the empty ground on the right. I think you did the right thing here in making the horizon line so low so the ground texture would not overwhelm the kites in the empty sky.