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| 01/24/2003 09:02:29 PM |
Head Up!by RemieComment by jimmsp: Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) ΓΆ€“ Overall, quite good. Everything is generally centered, probably ok. I would like to see a version where the doll is moved to the right a tad, with a little more angle where the legs are aiming more left. I think this would help the overall flow. With the current angles, the head looks too large for the body. Good choice of vertical format.
(2) BACKGROUND ΓΆ€“ Very good. The white is the right choice, and this is well executed; smooth in all the right places.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL ΓΆ€“ Looks good. The top of the head is blown out a little, probably could have done ok with a little smaller aperture.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL ΓΆ€“ Looks ok to me. Good choice of B&W for this one.
(5) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO ΓΆ€“ Meets the humor challenge, brings on a smile. So good idea, and well executed.
Jim msp
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| 01/17/2003 09:27:52 PM |
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| 01/17/2003 01:59:36 PM |
Head Up!by RemieComment by Gekker: pure pornography! look at her flaunt those breasts:) made me laugh, glad you chose b/w. almost artsy hehe. this stilll cracks me up. |
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| 01/16/2003 04:49:02 PM |
Head Up!by RemieComment by tjuneau13: very original. I like the lighting here. This is a nice photo and has the humor element. = 8 |
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| 01/16/2003 04:54:03 AM |
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| 01/15/2003 02:10:05 PM |
Head Up!by RemieComment by Swashbuckler: Ohh the nudity! Neat shot! Funny! Having her hold her own head is such a great touch! Your background is - I dunno - I can't think of a better one, black doesn't seem like a good idea, but the white, it's sooo negative (in a glary sort of way) that I'm just not sure I can get fully behind it. O.K? 7 Swash |
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| 01/15/2003 10:25:25 AM |
Head Up!by RemieComment by autool: Nicely executed shot and technically sound. I especially like the whispery background. Problem is I doesn't hit my funny bone very hard. 7 |
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| 01/14/2003 07:57:06 PM |
Head Up!by RemieComment by Jacko: Now that's funny. My kind of crazy (sick?) humour. I like it. Nice compostion too. Jacko 9 |
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| 01/14/2003 07:28:33 PM |
Head Up!by RemieComment by lionelm: I like the way you handle the background.
Went back to see if you called it 'Blonde moment'
7. Lionel |
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| 01/14/2003 06:56:28 PM |
Head Up!by RemieComment by DougPaz: The positioning of the "model" is excellent. I like the B & W. Seems just a bit over-exposed to me. Good job. |
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