I hit it!
by Nightson

Comment by kari1:

::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting concept for success, and it is a real success for some of us.

Composition:
This is where I think some of the issues come from for the voters. Do a google search on rule of thirds and golden triange ... looking at how to apply these to a shot really helps in getting an image on its way to better scoring.

Subject:
meets the challenge, I don't understand the level of low soring onthis image. It blows me away that you have so many low scores and one comment.

Technical (Colour and light):
I think that this is good .. the picture is sharp for an action shot. I think I would have preferred a different angle, maybe a slight bit behind to get the boy actually hit the ball.

To grow its vote?:
take a look at the higher scorers and see what they have done, this is one of the best ways to learn ... it won't take long to start picking up some of the methods used by others.

Summary:
Good solid portfolio pic. keep it up.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

I hit it!
by Nightson

Comment by loseme:
Good action shot.

Alien Flower
by Nightson

Comment by Node:
Yeah, nice work.

Alien Flower
by Nightson

Comment by LalliSig:
Nice texture on the flower, looks odd green like that but it works.

Alien Flower
by Nightson

Comment by GIS_boy:
Nice colours. Some noise in the background and i think the foliage in the background doesn't add to this composition. However, the glow coming from the centre of the rose due to the colour inversion is very nice.

Alien Flower
by Nightson

Comment by seebrown:
a little busy for my taste

Alien Flower
by Nightson

Comment by absinthedesigns:
focus seems a bit off.