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by pbelasco

Comment by KaDi:
*Greetings from the Critique Club*

I really like this image and it's point of view. The perspective is interesting--it makes a graphic and pleasing composition.

I think it would be better if the man's head was in focus as well as the brick walkway. It loses some of its impact because of that.

Because the light falls off on the left side the image environment seems curved--I like that because it makes it look like the curve of the earth--I wish the right side of the picture continued that feeling.

The thing the man is carrying has very closely set lines--because of that, they seem to vibrate in the image. Perhaps there was too much "sharpening" in the prepration of this image that accentuated the vibration of the lines.

Overall, I think this is a pleasing image and perspective. The few technical issues add up to alot in such a simple composition and, unfortunately, hurt its appeal some. I would definitely suggest this is worth trying to take again (or something similar)!
--Kadi

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by pbelasco

Comment by thatcloudthere:
Ohhhh...such a beautiful pallette, and I can tell you waited...but the moment isn't quite right. Had you waited even longer this photo could have been well balanced. Good seeing, but not quite there in my opinion...

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by pbelasco

Comment by pepitoid:
even I don't grasp the perspective ideea I must admit it's an interesting composition here