1930
by nikoman

Comment by macrothing:
6 - Challenge met (I consider a photo of this put in a time capsule would depict this era for future generations). Criticism; whilst I am normally an advocate of unusual angles, I think you have detracted from the potential here. I have my suspicions you may have done this as that may be a 'modern' phone in the 'old style'(?), so good 'hiding' if that is the case. The ear piece is not in focus and if that were in focus and possibly just a more side on angle, including the flask, and a little straightening, especially seeing as you have that 'frame' in the 'set', would have made this a better photograph in my opinion. The sepia looks good. edit: typo

Message edited by author 2005-08-17 05:10:21.

1930
by nikoman

Comment by xylke:
These props have great opportunity but almost every element in the picture runs straight down the middle and the angle is a little odd. Try recomposing the elements, frame off the ceiling and get an angle where the numbers on the phone show.

1930
by nikoman

Comment by RKT:
I really like this...but maybe from a different angle? I love the wood tones and the sepia...but it's that "popcorn" ceiling that detracts from the illusion a bit , JMO.