In the Beginning, When We Were Younger
by danceswithadream

Comment by Glen King:
Nicely composed and an excellent subject. The only problem I see is a slight tilt that could be corrected in cropping.

In the Beginning, When We Were Younger
by danceswithadream

Comment by 2Shay:
Nice picture of kids playing. I would have rotated the crop a couple of degrees. It makes the picture look like it is hanging crooked. I like the feel of the photo otherwise. B&W, Sepiatone, I'm not sure what this is called but I like it.

In the Beginning, When We Were Younger
by danceswithadream

Comment by srbrubaker:
The lighting here is beautiful and the expressions are strong. It appears to me that the subjects are a little unsharp. I find the spaces at the left and right to be extraeneous And I think I'd have cropped out the looming bar. I'd also have rotated the photo so it was level, although it does feel more dynamic tilted. I'd have liked it better if the shoulder of the one child did not block the face of the fourth.