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Comment by ScooterMcNutty:
may i make a suggestion? the cloud seems to be blown out and a little harsh. and another. possibly try a reflector next time. i personally dont care for the shadow under her chin. But great job!

Nature's Headdress
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Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

First impressions are her stare ... right at me ... very unnerving!

Technically there is not much I can say. This is a great shot and the HM proves it.

Artistically this is great but there are a few things that bother me. First, the catchlight in her eye is quite distracting I find. Second, I find three is too much of her hand in the frame, maybe crop in a bit or have her other eye exposed but obscured by the leaves? I also find the abundance of foreground blur to be a little too much.

In summary a great shot, a great score, what more can I say.

Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry

Nature's Headdress
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Comment by Yo_Spiff:
A really well done photo, but one thing bothers me about it a lot. Her headwear is natural leaves, but her face is covered in heavy makeup. It seems contradictory. Perhaps a contradictory image was your intention, but it's not carrying across to me that way.I personally would have found a lighter hand on the makeup to suit the idea better. Still well done, and worth a vote on the positive side.

Nature's Headdress
by laposto

Comment by Lonni:
Has Librodo-like qualities, but I guess you are getting a lot of comments like that? I think that the crop on the bottom is a little harsh.

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Comment by Jutilda:
The arch of the flower parallel to the curve of her face is stunning.