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ericwoo Nikon D3 |
12/30/2006 09:14:53 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: As other voters have commented, the focus needs some work. The captured colors are very nice, but I think a color other than white would have been better for this one.
Lighting: The lighting is off. Your background is a bit too bright and your subject a bit too dark. Perhaps some fill flash would have benefited the end results here.
Composition/Content: Your composition is too centered for this shot. While I am no stickler for the 'rules' of photography, I think a more offset subject would have also helped.
My Opinion: I think with a few small adjustments, this one could have pulled a better score. I do like the creativity of meeting the challenge, as this is the only shot of its type that I remember in the results.
Eric
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
JunieMoon Sony DSLR-A100K |
12/24/2006 08:24:42 AM |
| Needs better focus so you could see the tension of the honey under the flies. Also detail on flies is very matte. A bit more shine would have been better. |
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dsterner Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi |
12/22/2006 08:49:58 PM |
| More of the concentric circles would appeal. |
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Fayea Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT |
12/22/2006 01:57:42 AM |
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posthumous Canon EOS-40D |
12/20/2006 12:46:10 PM |
| Flies are so ugly, but there is a hint of beauty here. It just needs something to get it over the hump. Perhaps if the flies were in better focus without necessarily being more detailed. 6 |
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crowis Konica Minolta Maxxum 5D |
12/19/2006 08:00:53 AM |
| This shot needs to be sharpened a little bit IMO. |
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Balko Canon EOS-50D |
12/19/2006 12:19:37 AM |
| I guess the adage is true... :) |
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sfmorris Canon EOS-40D |
12/18/2006 10:48:15 AM |
| Good idea, but not best focus. |
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piaffe529 Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT |
12/18/2006 10:01:35 AM |
| Looks a little over processed to me. |
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Judi Canon EOS-5D Mark II |
12/18/2006 04:57:15 AM |
| Ewwwwwww...I hate flies...the more dead ones the better. |
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kawana Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT |
12/18/2006 01:45:32 AM |
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asimchoudhri Canon EOS-5D Mark II |
12/18/2006 12:19:08 AM |
| not as many as you catch with flypaper :-) |
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