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03/12/2005 03:03:20 AM |
| This is way after the challenge and you may not care to hear my thoughts, but I will offer. I gave this shot a 4. I really liked the idea of the shallow depth of field, but it just doesn't work in this shot. It seems like the DOF is on the fence here. If it were tighter or longer, it would work better. Think of an Oreo commercial, would they have this many crumbs around or flakes on the creamy cookie center? It just seems too contrived of a shot. It seems like it was set up without motive and done just because you got the good angle on the separatated Oreos. (But I know that's not true.) That being said, I really like the idea of the shot. I think that the lighting is pretty good (which probably is the most important part) but it just didn't jive with me. Not that my photos are better, but I wanted to try to help out. |
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02/27/2005 03:34:43 PM |
mmm Oreos :) Good idea, well shot and clarity is nice.
I'm not that crazy about the composition... perhaps a different arrangement of the cookies in the background would have improved this shot.
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02/26/2005 06:47:01 PM |
| Really super shot... its only missing the glass of milk |
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02/26/2005 12:55:55 PM |
| This is a great idea, I like the composition and the cookies. Only small complaint I have is with the background color, for some reason the yellow (gold?) isn't working for me but I can't really think of something that would work better right now, maybe a red? |
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02/25/2005 12:50:50 AM |
| I like the idea, classic, but i'mnot sure about the choice of color for the backround. Unappatizing, does jive w/cookies |
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02/24/2005 07:14:39 PM |
| Man I was waiting to see this one. Funny. You made me laugh and that is worth one extra point. 8 |
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02/24/2005 01:29:41 PM |
| Yup its separated.... fairly well executed. I feel that this could have used less shadows and a little more detail. As for the subject it's a little bland IMO. Perhaps if this had been shot on a different color back groung it might have been more astheticly pleasing.. as is seems pretty average. |
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02/22/2005 12:56:46 AM |
| Good idea for the challenge, but the color is off to me. I don't care for the yellow background either. |
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02/21/2005 07:39:33 PM |
| hahaha. lI love the humor in this one :) |
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02/21/2005 04:13:23 PM |
| I would have liked a different color background. I like the idear |
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02/21/2005 02:43:27 PM |
| those cookies tend to leave a lot of crums!! |
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02/21/2005 08:46:18 AM |
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02/21/2005 08:24:58 AM |
| The lighting and dof is great. I'm not so sure about the composition tho. |
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02/21/2005 12:32:53 AM |
| a nice clear average macro shot....good job |
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