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06/03/2004 03:10:07 PM · #1 |
Hey all, i posted earlier requesting critiques, but the website i had didnt work... I think i got it worked out
//community.webshots.com/album/148997560JsspSe
I would like for someone to critique my photos and offer suggestions on how to improve them (I'm not very experienced with Photoshop, but I would like to learn how to do things with it to improve pictures)
There are 9 photographs I have taken in various situations. All of them are unedited, straight from the camera - (sorry if they take a while to load on dial-up connections - I will resize them if requested)
My personal favorites are "Teaching Billiards" and "Playing with Fire" - any comments on those would be especially appreciated.
Thanks in advance to anyone who helps me out with this.
Adam Fritz
screechyd@aol.com
//community.webshots.com/album/148997560JsspSe
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06/04/2004 12:51:32 PM · #2 |
Dodgeball I like - lots of action, but I would suggest houses at the top are cropped out.
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06/04/2004 01:46:56 PM · #3 |
My favorite is Dodgeball, too. I also like Airborne, except the kid throwing the ball has a really odd expression on his face. These both stand out to me because their composition really leads your eye through the entire image.
I like Playing With Fire for its abstract approach, vivid colors, and diagonal line that adds a nice dynamic feel to the composition.
Your other shots could be improved possibly by playing around with the rule of thirds more, not having your subjects so much in the center of the photos. But you've done a good job of getting in close and making the subjects themselves stand out.
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06/06/2004 01:34:52 PM · #4 |
| Thanks! Those tips will help me out a lot! |
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