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Watching the world go by
Watching the world go by
pcrymble


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Window View (Advanced Editing I)
Camera: Nikon D70
Location: Belfast, N.Ireland
Date: Apr 5, 2004
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 1500
Shutter: 1/20
Galleries: Portraiture, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Apr 5, 2004

Caught from outside my house, the white stripes are the vertical blinds in the window.

Statistics
Place: 83 out of 135
Avg (all users): 5.2424
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 5.1136
Avg (non-participants): 5.3896
Views since voting: 932
Votes: 165
Comments: 4
Favorites: 0


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04/25/2004 04:29:22 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

I love this shot, I have no idea if it was staged or not but it's a beautiful, thoughtful shot and the sepia works very well with this, though a touch, just a small touch more contrast would make it work a little better to me. I like the wide vertical line on the right but the thinner one on the left is a bit distracting to me. The composition, the cropping is close to perfect. A slightly higher crop on the top, so the top of her head isn't cut off would make this perfect for me. It's so close now that I would like to see the rest of the hair.

Black and white, with a higher contrast would also make this a great shot. Not much else to say except looking at your final score, you were robbed!

Good Luck In Future Challenges!

Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/14/2004 01:40:54 PM
Nice portrait - 7
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04/12/2004 07:52:57 PM
Thought-provoking.
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04/12/2004 04:58:39 PM
Simple, elegant. The title definitely adds to the impact. Good work.
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