Critique Club Review:
I might have waited till a little late in the day for the picture. 10 to 2 the sun is almost directly overhead and makes features look flat.
Rotating the camera a bit so that the expansion joints in the concrete formed an X or two triangles, on inverted over the other might have helped also. Or if you had made the suquare teh chalk was in a triangle, by putting the intersection of the expansion joints at the very top or bottom of the photo so that you only see two lines coming together.
I like the way you arranged the chalk. Gave the picture a nice effect.
Nice take on the challenge. Very creative with minimal resources. Hope you enjoyed your first challenge.
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