OK, it doesnt grab me, my initial impression was that it looked a bit like a tabloid nespaper cover (thats probably due to the red top). Also, I know my english isnt all that great, but you really need to proof read your text better, its comes across as very broken english and as a result would put off prospective clients. example
"- Full covourage of the Wedding, from the Bride getting ready to the leaving of the Groom and Bride at the reception.
All the special moments will be covered and will be taken as it happen. No posing a shot cause the Photographer needs to leave.
I travel as well and additional costs can be discussed upon consultation. "
Next on the list is the "my news" section, if you are running this as a business site I doubt many people will be interested in whats been happening with your business.. Wedding Photography, generally, isnt a business where your clients will keep coming back, sure they will recommend people to you, and they may use you for portraits etc, but personally I would do away with that section, or alternatively if you really want it, bury it away in the site someplace else.
Next, remove the gallery from the frontpage, people dont really want to scroll around too much if they are visiting your site for the first time.. A site like DPC can afford to have a certain amount of scrolling since they have a captured audience who are coming back here on a regular basis, but on a corporate site you need to try and get what you are about on the first page.. even Microsoft who probably get one or two hits a day keep all their info in the top part of the page and requires minimal scrolling. Feel free to make subsequent pages longer, once they are `in` the site then its not so much of a problem..
Just my 0.02p worth. |
