Looking at the thumbnails, I would have said the leafy one, but looking at the full size, I'm no so sure.
The green one is okay except that there are some out of focus areas. The right side of the picture's focus seems to be substantially better than the center, unfortunately, at first glance, people go to the center, and they may or may not look long enough to see it is more a shallow dof thing than an oof thing.
The beach has a decent, balanced composition, but the light is kinda flat and even, making it less dramatic than possible. I think with the right post-processing, it could really kick some butt. Maybe PM Brad and see if he could help you, or bear_music. Both guys are really nice and really know their way around photoshop.
Why not one of these?
Message edited by author 2007-04-25 23:40:18. |