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03/24/2006 12:58:27 AM · #1
Link to the gallery is over here

Currently there are six images there only, will update once i have done editting them.
03/24/2006 01:01:05 AM · #2
Umm focking awesome? I know very little about model shoots so maybe someone experienced there can find faults with these because I don't see anything wrong with any of them.

Message edited by author 2006-03-24 16:19:58.
03/24/2006 01:07:50 AM · #3
The only thing I don't like the the glaring light in the 5th one that cuts off part of the model's features. I think you should have put it more behind her head, to give her more of a halo. Otherwise, they look wonderful.
03/24/2006 02:01:11 AM · #4
Wow.. stunning model. Great work I agree a halo effect might have been a bit more fun in the one shot but I quite like them all... especially drawn to the more natural ones with less make-up .. highlights her natural glow and beauty :)

**edit to add**

Message edited by author 2006-03-24 02:02:20.
03/24/2006 02:45:38 AM · #5
Great stuff, I definitely can't critique them. I looked through your other galleries, excellent work there too.

My favorite so far is this one, I love basically everything about it. :D
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03/24/2006 03:17:11 AM · #6
image 1. the pose and lighting is excellent, but I would like it better if the model was looking more at the camera without changing her position, just so we would see her pupil instear of just the white in her eyes.

image 2. beautiful shot, lighting a bit soft, could use a black bouncer to add shadows, but the pose is perfect.

image 3. lighting and pose is perfect, I would have liked to see the camera higher though, dont like to see up the models nostrils.

image 4. very nice, good pose, nice use of the backdrop, lighting is good maby a bit hard.

image 5. could be a great shot but the spotlight needs to go behind the head to give the halo, and the arm she's leaning on.. she needs to turn it a bit, it looks like it's broken ;)

image 6. great profile shot, lighting is good, pose is good exept her right arm isn't doing anything in the image, her left arm is supporting her chin and has a purpose, her right arm doesn't.

overall an excellent serie, I hope the model is pleased :)
03/24/2006 07:38:27 AM · #7
My only complaint would be there not in my portfolio. Great looking shots.
03/24/2006 08:10:02 AM · #8
Very nice, I realy like the backlight one.
Very nice and very brave, lot's of people will say that's an error, but hey, what do they know ;)
Would even have liked it with a bit more flare.

Great work. TFS
03/24/2006 12:54:43 PM · #9
Thanks for all the comments so far. All point is noted.

As for image 5, I do get a lot of mixed reactions to it. It's nice to hear all kinds of opinions. As for the lighting, it was intentional to frame the model's head slightly away from the strobe.
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