I'm not a pro by any means ... I like the "feel" of the photo, but the sunlight on the water is really blown out, and takes away from any detail. I'm sure the silhouette was intentional, but so much is in shadow, it's hard to know what I'm looking at. I think maybe if you had a different angle, maybe more behind the people so that their shadows don't blend in with the foliage around them, and then get some more detail of the hills in the background, would really improve the composition. I did something like this myself, and the more I look at it, the more I think of ways to improve it.
Hopefully this helps ... and try some post processing and see what you get out of it! :)
Tara |
