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Canon EF 135mm f/2.0L USM

04/12/2005 09:11:49 PM · #1

*added another*

Message edited by author 2005-04-13 00:14:34.

lentil

Canon EOS-5D

04/12/2005 09:14:02 PM · #2

i like this one. i looked at all of your other ones you did the other day and this is the best. Looks kinda spooky

Skip

Canon EOS-1D X

Canon EF 300mm f/2.8L IS USM

04/12/2005 09:18:54 PM · #3

glad to see the new guitar is working out for you

;-)

Message edited by author 2005-04-12 21:19:45.

04/12/2005 10:16:50 PM · #4

guitar? Thanks I guess.

Thanks lentil.

04/13/2005 12:14:03 AM · #5

Here's another one...

Comments appreciated.

Tamron AF 28-300mm f/3.5-6.3 XR Di LD Aspherical IF for Canon

04/13/2005 07:54:45 AM · #6

bump

Anyone else have any thoughts or ideas for improvements?

puma

Canon EOS-10D

04/13/2005 08:32:09 AM · #7

I like both shots but I like the first one the best, it is really well done. The light and compostion are very pleasing. The second on I am not sure if you did some burning or dodging to the newspaper boxes but they have a ring of lightness around them that does not work for me. I like the compostion but the boxes seem a bit off. Still both very nice shots.

Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 ED

04/13/2005 05:51:07 PM · #8

Thanks for looking puma!

Tuckersmom

Panasonic Lumix DMC-TZ1

04/13/2005 06:02:52 PM · #9

I like them both, but would pick the second one. The first one is nice and I love the depth of the toning (can you tell me how you did that?) Only thing I would do different, and again this is just my opinion is get rid of the airplane trails in the sky, just something small I noticed. On the second one, I really like the angle (I tend to like sideways things :) and how it's shot at almost street level. The line in the sidewalk draws my eye into the shot. Good job!

Haimai

Nikon D50

04/13/2005 06:14:28 PM · #10

i'm not so sure about the B&W. after looking at 200 B&W buildings my eyes are going fuzzy. they are very well done.
i want to know what you think of the shodow in front.

Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS

04/13/2005 06:20:05 PM · #11

Thanks.

What shadow?

Artifacts

Canon EOS-5D Mark II

04/13/2005 06:31:04 PM · #12

Originally posted by deapee:

*added another*

First one:
The perspective supports it's darker overtone. I would crop out the distracting jet contrails and wires from this one to make it complete.

Second one:
Again, nice perspective but the composition needs something to fill the uninteresting foreground. The bright starkness of the background gives it the feeling of a harsh, uncaring metropolis. All you need is a homeless person asleep leaning against the newspaper stands and it would be perfect. It would give the title more meaning.

Message edited by author 2005-04-13 18:35:53.

lentil

Canon EOS-5D

Canon EF 135mm f/2.0L USM

04/13/2005 06:38:49 PM · #13

on the first one, i was watching Will and Grace and that looks heaps like their building. When i saw it last night i said hey! that is where deepee shot that pic. Am I right?