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08/15/2002 10:18:14 PM · #1
i know there's already been a thread on this somewhere, but i have to admit i'm too lazy to search ... i'm rather late with this, but here's a 'something new' outtake i didn't submit - totally different from what i did submit. any feedback (good, bad, or indifferent)? thanks!:)

turning over a new leaf
08/15/2002 10:24:08 PM · #2
its nice, not incredibly exciting but a lot better than i could do :O)
08/15/2002 11:24:40 PM · #3
I really do like it. I would have scored it quite high.
08/16/2002 08:28:33 AM · #4
thanks for your comments, meggie & short. :)
08/16/2002 09:51:28 AM · #5
I think its a very good concept. Needs a bit more excitement, it feels very rigid..reminds me of my shots sometimes..meaning a neat idea..technically well done but a bit cold.

Maybe a more dramatic and lower angle..pull in tighter to the persons body, lower and/or closer with more dramatic lighting.

Hard to say though. Experimentation is worth a try though. And the Computer generated list feels very cold...Maybe a handwritten set of notes on spiral notebook paper with the torn out left side edges.

Forgive me I am rambling on..just thinking out loud :-)

(edited lover versus lower angle..although..now that I think about it :-)

* This message has been edited by the author on 8/16/2002 10:06:22 AM.
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