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08/15/2002 10:18:14 PM · #1 |
i know there's already been a thread on this somewhere, but i have to admit i'm too lazy to search ... i'm rather late with this, but here's a 'something new' outtake i didn't submit - totally different from what i did submit. any feedback (good, bad, or indifferent)? thanks!:)
turning over a new leaf
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08/15/2002 10:24:08 PM · #2 |
its nice, not incredibly exciting but a lot better than i could do :O) |
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08/15/2002 11:24:40 PM · #3 |
I really do like it. I would have scored it quite high. |
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08/16/2002 08:28:33 AM · #4 |
thanks for your comments, meggie & short. :)
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08/16/2002 09:51:28 AM · #5 |
I think its a very good concept. Needs a bit more excitement, it feels very rigid..reminds me of my shots sometimes..meaning a neat idea..technically well done but a bit cold.
Maybe a more dramatic and lower angle..pull in tighter to the persons body, lower and/or closer with more dramatic lighting.
Hard to say though. Experimentation is worth a try though. And the Computer generated list feels very cold...Maybe a handwritten set of notes on spiral notebook paper with the torn out left side edges.
Forgive me I am rambling on..just thinking out loud :-)
(edited lover versus lower angle..although..now that I think about it :-)
* This message has been edited by the author on 8/16/2002 10:06:22 AM. |
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