For me, the blue reflective ball wants a much tighter crop - like with the deformity as the upper right, and just below and to the left of the arch as the bottom left. Don't be hesitant - SHOW the image you want.
The sky with white frame is a hodge podge. Unless the 5 layer support serves a critical function in the picture, it attracts way too much attention (too big, too central, too ...). I find the stains running down the white wood distracting. The contrast between the white wood and blue sky is very nice, but for me there are just too many angles to have the image present a coordinated concept. For me, yes there's a picture there - somewhere, but that's not it. I've been intrigued by similar subjects, but have never been able to resolve them to my satisfaction. |