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10/08/2012 10:25:28 AM · #1


Can you please critique this HDR shot from the recent Free Study? I didn't really get any comments to help me understand it's mediocrity!


10/08/2012 10:33:24 AM · #2
the composition is very nice, great sun flare but its needs more, either is needs to be whimsical or tack sharp, its just sits in the middle yearning to be a bit more.

if you have a chance, try to redo it and really try to get some sharpness to it. the foreground is a bit blown and lacks real details.
10/08/2012 10:36:13 AM · #3
Left a comment with my thoughts/suggestions.
10/08/2012 10:39:22 AM · #4
Originally posted by mike_311:

the composition is very nice, great sun flare but its needs more, either is needs to be whimsical or tack sharp, its just sits in the middle yearning to be a bit more.

if you have a chance, try to redo it and really try to get some sharpness to it. the foreground is a bit blown and lacks real details.


Thanks. I think you are right. I did pop the exposure on the foreground with a gradient because I exposed for the sky in camera. I think the sharpness is a problem too and It probably has to do with the fact that I shot my brackets handheld and I did not use L glass. There really is a difference in the sharpness with L glass and the EF-S lenses!! No comparison there.

Originally posted by CNovak:

Left a comment with my thoughts/suggestions.


Thank you. I will be revisiting this subject again.
10/08/2012 11:48:08 AM · #5
You darkened the sun / did a highlight recovery too hard.

There is a dark halo around the sun..

Otherwise, underexpose - use your histogram, make sure you don't have everything crammed against the right side of the histogram, a spike is fine, but too much means trouble.

Shoot in RAW - frankly, I could have probably gotten close to the same DR, without the strangeness.

Hope that helps.
10/08/2012 01:46:24 PM · #6
Originally posted by Cory:

You darkened the sun / did a highlight recovery too hard.

There is a dark halo around the sun..

Otherwise, underexpose - use your histogram, make sure you don't have everything crammed against the right side of the histogram, a spike is fine, but too much means trouble.

Shoot in RAW - frankly, I could have probably gotten close to the same DR, without the strangeness.

Hope that helps.


I think you gave me a few things to think about. Thanks. I will have to watch the highlight/shadows adjustments in the future. Of course I always shoot in raw.

About the strangeness, are you referring to the super saturated contrasty colors?
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