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06/09/2004 07:33:19 PM · #1 |
let's see if i can do this right this time...
if it works, i'd love any thoughts
blackberry
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sunset |
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06/09/2004 07:52:33 PM · #2 |
The blackberry blossom is a bit out of focus and you could move in quite a bit closer to really emphasise it. It kind of gets lost among the foliage.
Edited after looking at the photo again: I now notice that what happened is you focused on the leaf directly behind the blossom and the blossom was thrown out of focus. Does your camera have a macro setting? If so, what is the focus range? You may not have the capability of getting quite the macro shot you would like on a blossom this small.
The sunset picture is quite nice. I would suggest cropping about half of the bottom as it is quite a lot of dark empty space. I can't look at the photo while making this comment but if memory serves, the black takes up nearly as much of the frame as the sky. The sky should perhaps take up about two-thirds of the frame.
The other clouds picture was a bit small to get much of an idea of the quality. The lighting in the clouds seemed quite impressive.
Message edited by author 2004-06-09 19:56:06. |
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06/09/2004 07:57:31 PM · #3 |
| and straighten the horizon - all the trees are leaning right. It is unsettling to look at an image with a slightly tilted horizon, takes away from what I SHOULD be loooking at - the clouds. |
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06/09/2004 09:24:01 PM · #4 |
Originally posted by angeldust:
let's see if i can do this right this time...
if it works, i'd love any thoughts
blackberry
sky
sunset |
Blackberry is focusing on everything excpet the flower,
Sky is so-so, Its not very apealing to me,
and Sunset is gorgeous! but once again I don't really want to look at it for very long. |
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