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05/21/2009 12:24:16 AM · #101 |
hey peeps, heres what might be my final poster
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05/21/2009 01:32:37 AM · #102 |
Great job, excellent photo. Statistics are well written and presented. I really like the way it portrays the negative side while adding that if you do find yourself in that situation, you can still do your best to bring about a positive outcome. Helps deter future teen pregnancies while giving hope and encouragement to those that are already pregnant. Good luck (from a fellow Montanan)! |
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05/21/2009 08:25:06 AM · #103 |
Originally posted by paperpages: Great job, excellent photo. Statistics are well written and presented. I really like the way it portrays the negative side while adding that if you do find yourself in that situation, you can still do your best to bring about a positive outcome. Helps deter future teen pregnancies while giving hope and encouragement to those that are already pregnant. Good luck (from a fellow Montanan)! |
yay! thanks so much for the feedback:) |
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05/21/2009 08:28:41 AM · #104 |
one really minor thing, but in one statistic you spell out percent, and in others you use the %. that's really nitpicky, but it's something a judge or someone might notice. otherwise, awesome job :D |
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05/21/2009 10:51:31 AM · #105 |
Originally posted by steefmcbeef: one really minor thing, but in one statistic you spell out percent, and in others you use the %. that's really nitpicky, but it's something a judge or someone might notice. otherwise, awesome job :D |
I did change that in the final, it was bugging me too:). The only place I spelled out percent was in the first like because I didn't want a number as the first thing you read. |
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05/21/2009 10:56:21 AM · #106 |
Originally posted by JDubsgirl: Originally posted by steefmcbeef: one really minor thing, but in one statistic you spell out percent, and in others you use the %. that's really nitpicky, but it's something a judge or someone might notice. otherwise, awesome job :D |
I did change that in the final, it was bugging me too:). The only place I spelled out percent was in the first like because I didn't want a number as the first thing you read. |
good call. that turned out to be a great poster :) |
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05/21/2009 11:01:41 AM · #107 |
here is my odd take on all this....
consider your audience... you trying to send message to 1. women 2. teens
women don't like to get message directly.. they need to figure out for themselves (according some theories anyway)
teens just plainly deny everything
so... you should have very little to no text and do not say anything directly... you should sort of hint your message
I would have have photo of a pregnant woman that looks happy and message would say "motherhood is full joys, if you are ready"
that's just me |
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05/21/2009 11:05:27 AM · #108 |
I feel that theres too much text, also not a big fan of the font. Just my opinion and good luck to you. |
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06/05/2009 10:59:56 PM · #109 |
Just wanted to say i got second in the contest. i knew it was a tough one between me and this other more abstract poster, and i guess thats what the judges wanted. Still pretty cool though:) |
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06/06/2009 12:40:40 AM · #110 |
Second is definitely nothing to sneeze at, girl! :) |
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06/06/2009 12:44:11 AM · #111 |
Congratulations! 2nd place is awesome! – Hey, in DPC terms that’s a Red Ribbon! You worked hard on your poster and it turned out wonderfully and very informative as well! |
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06/06/2009 12:54:59 AM · #112 |
:) thanks guys. im pleased, but i was hoping for first. strange, as soon as i get out of dpc land i actually start wanting to do good lol |
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06/06/2009 08:58:52 AM · #113 |
Originally posted by JDubsgirl: Ok im shooting for a teens shoting teens pregnancy poster contest(no, im not the pregnant one). so the deal is i haveno idea how to shoot it. the idea of the contest is to...
"convey how an unplanned pregnancy would impact you, your family, or your community."
lucky for me, i located an ex friend of mine who's 8 months pregnant. so, any suggestions on how i should go about this? i dont necessarily want to make it negative, but i dont want to do a smiling mom with a belly hanging out shot. |
How about the girl standing at the camera with her arms crossed and the look on her face like WHATEVER... Then her "parents" in the background holding the pregnancy test screaming at her. OR with the dad screaming at her and her mom holding up baby clothes or giving the affect of her shopping for clothes.
Like this but not so high up.
Or like this
Message edited by author 2009-06-06 09:02:09. |
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06/06/2009 12:05:28 PM · #114 |
thanks dirt diver, but ive arealdy gotten second:) thanks for contributing though |
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06/06/2009 12:39:31 PM · #115 |
Congrats on 2nd place! It may not be first, but it's certainly not last! LOL! You did a wonderful job! |
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06/06/2009 07:17:00 PM · #116 |
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06/06/2009 10:16:41 PM · #117 |
Hey JDubs!
Congrats on your 2nd!! I think you did a great job! So with the picture as with the message of the poster!!
Is there any place on the web that we can check the results and see the other works? |
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06/06/2009 10:56:48 PM · #118 |
WOW! Second place! Congratulations! What an accomplishment! |
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06/06/2009 11:20:09 PM · #119 |
:D thanks everyone. i guess i get a few prizes for it, but they havent said what yet. i really want to longboard they advertised, since i would think it would come second after the iPod. that would be pretty cool, ive been meaning to learn for a few years, plus there are already 5 iPods in this house of 3 people:/ |
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06/11/2009 08:43:34 PM · #120 |
Well can we see the poster??? |
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06/11/2009 10:02:15 PM · #121 |
oh! good idea, ill post momentarily |
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06/11/2009 10:07:59 PM · #122 |
here it is
Message edited by author 2009-06-11 22:08:44. |
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