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 04/12/2008 09:35:31 PM · #1
photo of my daughter, comments on the portrait please -technical vs artistic standpoint

thanks

04/12/2008 09:44:59 PM · #2
Technicals are excellent - the eyes and smile are crystal clear and the background is softly muted yet recognizable. The smile seems genuine and very commercial. Maybe posting the original might help reveal a bit more about hte technicals. The composition and odd-ness of the arms are a bit curious but a great model can trump things like that. I think if the branch or whatever she is holding on were visible in the shot it might reveal a bit more of the story and the pose wouldn't seem as odd.
 04/12/2008 09:58:20 PM · #3
If you're up for an image flop - I think a crop like this might be more appealing
obviously you lose pixels - but the face is what is so great about this shot.
 04/12/2008 09:59:46 PM · #4
Originally posted by metatate:
If you're up for an image flop - I think a crop like this might be more appealing
obviously you lose pixels - but the face is what is so great about this shot.


i agree, and LAC
 04/12/2008 10:07:40 PM · #5
I left a comment. I was going to say a tighter crop could save this shot. The edit above proves it.
 04/13/2008 07:44:34 AM · #6
hey,thanks everyone. really appreciate the thought and comment, amazing what a different eye can see though. thanks again

Jack
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