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04/11/2007 09:02:30 AM · #1
Took this one during the Easter break, I've done some slight editing on it, reducing the contrast etc.
Is it any good?

04/11/2007 11:08:49 AM · #2
This has great potential I think...... I love the muted greys of the foliage blending with the grey of the sky. It has an isolated, lonely feel to it and you usually can't go wrong with a leading lines composition. However, my 2p worth is that the foreground distraction takes away from the image too much. Also, I think positioning the tracks off to the side will really help. Processing wise, possibly burn in some of the clouds, boost saturation in the blue a bit.....and bingo!
04/11/2007 11:13:55 AM · #3
I concur with Arjay.

The fg, and the right side twigs are distracting.

Offsetting the road is not a bad idea, as per the 'rule of thirds'.

Other than that, it does have great potential.
04/11/2007 07:33:55 PM · #4
is this one any better? I've noticed by viewing this one on another screen that it is too dark, but I also do not get the same feel from this one as I do the original.
Do you think it is worth cropping the first one to get rid of the branches in the foreground?



Message edited by author 2007-04-12 08:08:20.
04/12/2007 07:34:00 AM · #5
and found one more....

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