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02/10/2007 07:20:49 PM · #1
I am mostly interested in comments on processing and how differently I could have done it. But any comments would be appreciated.

02/10/2007 09:01:14 PM · #2
To make the picture more special, I would choose to take it at sunrise or sunset, and show more of the ocean using wide angle so that the house appears a little smaller. That way the house actually stands out more.
02/10/2007 09:04:23 PM · #3
Might be an interesting spot to take shots during different seasons and weather conditions.
02/10/2007 09:09:59 PM · #4
I dunno, it seems like it's facing the wrong direction to me. Perhaps it's a cultural thing (wanting to read from left to right, I mean). What if you flip it horizontally? And then crop into the sky and grass to get rid of some of the excess?
02/10/2007 09:11:31 PM · #5
Here, this is what I mean... I haven't touched it as far as any editing is concerned, I just flipped it and cropped it so you could see what I had in mind:



Next you might want to bump up the contrast or play with the saturation just a bit.

Message edited by author 2007-02-10 21:12:10.
02/10/2007 09:24:24 PM · #6
I just think it's a little "blah". So, I tried editing it a little. I think the point of this image needs to emphasize the way in that the building seems so lonely. That's what I tried to accomplish with my edit!

02/10/2007 09:32:25 PM · #7
Originally posted by dwterry:

Here, this is what I mean... I haven't touched it as far as any editing is concerned, I just flipped it and cropped it so you could see what I had in mind:



Next you might want to bump up the contrast or play with the saturation just a bit.

I like this, except that for some reason it seems to face the wrong way to me, that's probably because I know the actual place is not like that. But I do like this otherwise
02/10/2007 09:33:29 PM · #8
Originally posted by bowronfam3:

I just think it's a little "blah". So, I tried editing it a little. I think the point of this image needs to emphasize the way in that the building seems so lonely. That's what I tried to accomplish with my edit!



This image looks like it has a really bad cast to me. It also has a pretty bad bending in the sky. Sorry, but not my kind of thing.
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