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10/22/2003 01:17:09 AM · #1
What do you guys think? I need all the criticism I can get , pro or con. Thanks!
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10/22/2003 03:22:19 AM · #2
I much prefer the second one because the colors are richer and the model looks sharper.

I'm not sure what it is about the first one I don't like, maybe because her jumping pose seems atypical so it looks strange to my eyes.


10/22/2003 08:39:18 AM · #3
Unlevel horizons in both shots make them less professional looking. The colors seem flat - nothing jumps off the page at you.

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10/22/2003 09:32:38 AM · #4
about the photo or the girl? girls hot, photos not. horizons should rarely run through the middle of the frame and I think you would be much better off getting closer shots of her. also women photo'd straight on show smaller breasts and football shoulders.
10/22/2003 09:42:08 AM · #5
Honestly? I don't like the first one at all. I don't think women would jump like that on the beach.

The second one is ok. It feels like the waters going to spill out of the ocean any minute now. It bugs me that I can't see her legs. Not sure why. Maybe try a faster shutter speed and use a tripod. You will get much clearer pictures.
Colors are very nice!
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