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09/20/2006 03:46:06 PM · #1
I just did a shoot for a product that want a beach theme with a young couple at sunset. They wanted me to show intimacy and love. Give me your opinion if I captured this.

Message edited by author 2006-09-22 11:39:28.
09/20/2006 04:02:44 PM · #2
Much better composition and pose, would still crop it closer (which would lop off part of the overexposed sky) and increase the contrast a tad. Nice shot.
09/20/2006 04:56:33 PM · #3
Well this one doesn't have the warm colors I was talking about, but 'feels' much better. Nice composition and pose - that alone is great for the mood factor. I agree with routerguy about the crop. Maybe crop, so that they are on the left 1/3 vertical.
09/20/2006 06:36:11 PM · #4
You REALLY need to get down lower so their heads don't bisect the horizon, that's totally the kiss of death here...

R.
09/22/2006 10:31:03 AM · #5
Thank you all for your advise. Here's my updated version. Click here to view updated photo.
09/22/2006 10:45:14 AM · #6
The wardrobe is pretty bad.
09/22/2006 10:56:26 AM · #7
Updated ver is a big improvement, nice work.
09/22/2006 10:58:43 AM · #8
updated is nice but there is too much shadow over her from him and it's a little distracting.
09/22/2006 11:19:00 AM · #9
Originally posted by tony2802:

I just did a shoot for a product that want a beach theme with a young couple at sunset. They wanted me to show intimacy and love. Give me your opinion if I captured this.Click to view Photo


The photos seems to have been removed from that site. Here is the message that I received:

"Photo Removed or Not Approved
Sorry - the photo you have requested has been removed or has not been approved for publishing"

09/22/2006 11:31:23 AM · #10
had to remove the first to install the second. Click on the bottom link
09/22/2006 11:36:16 AM · #11
Originally posted by tony2802:

had to remove the first to install the second. Click on the bottom link


Thanks...as a suggestion, you may want to edit the original message in order to update the link with the new photo.
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