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09/08/2006 01:13:55 PM · #1


is this photo too post processed??? i'll give a comment for each comment left.

thanks :)
09/08/2006 01:29:23 PM · #2
left a comment
09/08/2006 01:30:44 PM · #3
thanks!!!!
09/08/2006 01:38:18 PM · #4
First off, I really like the idea of the shot. :D I think the composition works very nicely as well. I would normally avoid having too much open space on either side of the frame, but the space to the right of the boy works perfectly for this subject matter. It not only gives you a sense of the direction both the golfers are driving towards, but I think it's also good that you cropped out the head of the man's golf club, tee, etc. They would have taken away from the main subject of your shot.

As far as critiques go, I think the highlights look just a little blown out. Even on my dark monitor at work, the skin tone of the boy seems too bright - even for being Irish... ;) Also, I think the DOF could have worked a little better for this image. I would definitely have shot with a very shallow DOF to blur out that distracting building behind the trees. Then you could just have the boy in sharp focus and everything else a bit blurred (especially the background). I like the white border, but probably would have gone with a smaller one. But overall, I think this a great photo! Good job. :D
09/08/2006 01:41:05 PM · #5
Originally posted by cutlassdude70:

First off, I really like the idea of the shot.... Good job. :D


Uhm... what he said... Except the part about the border.... I personally do not like most borders of any kind.

Message edited by author 2006-09-08 13:42:03.
09/08/2006 01:44:43 PM · #6
thanks, guys, for all the great comments. i've had a great time looking at all of your portfolios!!! i've left some love in your portfolios!
09/08/2006 01:53:47 PM · #7
left one comment :)
09/08/2006 01:55:31 PM · #8
me too! Love the pic ... we might have the next Tiger Woods captured here!
09/08/2006 02:00:06 PM · #9
Originally posted by pamelasue:

me too! Love the pic ... we might have the next Tiger Woods captured here!


we totally wish max were the next tiger!

thanks for the comments!
09/08/2006 03:44:02 PM · #10
Left a comment, really liked the shot!
09/08/2006 04:31:07 PM · #11
left you one...mostly on the golfing set up.

Josh
09/08/2006 04:43:44 PM · #12
Left you a comment too!
09/08/2006 04:46:51 PM · #13
thanks, again, everyone!!!
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