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07/10/2006 01:17:24 AM · #1
Please post your Straight from the Camera entry and it's edited version in this thread for comparison.
Here's mine:
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It scored 6.668, my 5th highest score ever.

And here's the same shot with some minor editing (steps in the Photog Comment's).
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07/10/2006 02:10:11 AM · #2
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07/10/2006 02:17:12 AM · #3
coolhar: the original is spectacular and your edits are very subtle - real hard to see improvement. Congrats on the great score!

Rgar: I like your edited version better - the colors pop more. You also got a great score and a great finish on your original. Not much to improve on.
07/10/2006 02:20:17 AM · #4
ok, now that I saw the edited versions how can I go back and lower my votes? :P

Nice work guys.
07/10/2006 02:26:08 AM · #5
entered:
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edited:
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I got comments that the cast was disctacting, but not much I could do about it. None of my other kids would 'model' for me that day...
07/10/2006 02:28:10 AM · #6
My entry
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Edited
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Couple of outtakes that have been edited...
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Message edited by author 2006-07-10 04:21:26.
07/10/2006 02:34:33 AM · #7
Originally posted by margiemu:

I got comments that the cast was disctacting, but not much I could do about it. None of my other kids would 'model' for me that day...

Looks like you shouldn't have twisted her arm so much to get her to model. ;-) j/k

I like both shots, but actually like your original frame/crop best.
07/10/2006 02:41:47 AM · #8
Wow Bec, those shots are beautiful!
07/10/2006 02:53:08 AM · #9
Thanks Penny...Yes, Amy is my youngest daughter, just turned 4....She pretty much is my portfolio :)...She loves the camera!!
07/10/2006 02:55:50 AM · #10
My entry:

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The edit:

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07/10/2006 03:33:14 AM · #11
Entry, scored 5.27;
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My edit;
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07/10/2006 03:47:50 AM · #12
Originally posted by Rgarcia:

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Left u a comment - very nice, btw
07/10/2006 04:16:17 AM · #13
Straight - 6.234
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edited
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07/10/2006 04:16:50 AM · #14
Originally posted by BeeCee:

Entry, scored 5.27;
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My edit;
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Really like your edited version with the deeper colours BeeCee :)
07/10/2006 07:51:55 AM · #15
Thanks Art, I think what you said can be applied to most of the Straight entries, they were pretty good to start with and only needed minor touch up to look their best.
07/10/2006 07:59:06 AM · #16
I didn't do much editing on the edited version

Entry:
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Edited:
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07/10/2006 08:34:46 AM · #17
I entered this:

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I would have entered this, but it needed curves bad:

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07/10/2006 09:17:54 AM · #18
Entry:
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Edited Outtake:
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07/10/2006 09:57:21 AM · #19
Here's mine...

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Edited version: ' . substr('//images.dpchallenge.com/images_portfolio/15266/thumb/361535.jpg', strrpos('//images.dpchallenge.com/images_portfolio/15266/thumb/361535.jpg', '/') + 1) . '
07/10/2006 10:04:24 AM · #20
Originally posted by Art Roflmao:

Rgar: I like your edited version better - the colors pop more. You also got a great score and a great finish on your original. Not much to improve on.


Thanks Ken, I also like the edited version for the same reasons.
07/10/2006 10:05:12 AM · #21
Originally posted by crayon:

Originally posted by Rgarcia:

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Left u a comment - very nice, btw


Thanks!!
07/10/2006 10:06:34 AM · #22
Originally posted by idnic:

Here's mine...

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Edited version: ' . substr('//images.dpchallenge.com/images_portfolio/15266/thumb/361535.jpg', strrpos('//images.dpchallenge.com/images_portfolio/15266/thumb/361535.jpg', '/') + 1) . '

I think your edited version shows more improvement that most of the others here, it has brought out the color of her eye make-up nicely, and I really like the added highlights in her hair, well edited.
07/10/2006 10:14:22 AM · #23
Originally posted by coolhar:

I think your edited version shows more improvement that most of the others here, it has brought out the color of her eye make-up nicely, and I really like the added highlights in her hair, well edited.


Thank you, Harvey! :)
07/10/2006 10:20:15 AM · #24
Looking through the entries in this challenge, almost all of them including the ribbon winners could have been improved by editting. For instance the Red Ribbon has sensor dust in the top of the sky.
07/10/2006 10:21:33 AM · #25
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