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08/29/2003 05:07:43 PM · #1

For people who make suggestion to my shoot, I maded and want your comments.

Originall shoot:
//www.dpchallenge.com/image.php?IMAGE_ID=33956

Mod. shoot:
//www.dpchallenge.com/image.php?IMAGE_ID=35514

Thanks in advance.
08/29/2003 11:39:47 PM · #2
Jorge,

The second image is stonger than the first - it might be a little too saturated because some of the detail is lost. I rated your entry a 5. I did not think the composition was very strong - cute, but not memorable.

Dennis
08/30/2003 12:51:54 AM · #3
Originally posted by DennisF:

Jorge,

The second image is stonger than the first - it might be a little too saturated because some of the detail is lost. I rated your entry a 5. I did not think the composition was very strong - cute, but not memorable.

Dennis


Thanks for your comment Dannis. i think in the same way but I need more opinions.

I still trying to do a memorable shoot.


08/30/2003 01:11:12 AM · #4
Originally posted by cimarron98:

For people who make suggestion to my shoot, I maded and want your comments.

Originall shoot:
//www.dpchallenge.com/image.php?IMAGE_ID=33956

Mod. shoot:
//www.dpchallenge.com/image.php?IMAGE_ID=35514

Thanks in advance.


I also gave you a "5" on the original shot. The modified one has too much contrast. The background is too bright. Maybe a different color background may be better. You have a very fun design here, but taking out the sandals would make for a better composition.

08/30/2003 01:39:20 AM · #5
Originally posted by faidoi:

Originally posted by cimarron98:

For people who make suggestion to my shoot, I maded and want your comments.

Originall shoot:
//www.dpchallenge.com/image.php?IMAGE_ID=33956

Mod. shoot:
//www.dpchallenge.com/image.php?IMAGE_ID=35514

Thanks in advance.


I also gave you a "5" on the original shot. The modified one has too much contrast. The background is too bright. Maybe a different color background may be better. You have a very fun design here, but taking out the sandals would make for a better composition.


Thanks for your comment. I will try to shoot another whitout sandals.

Regards
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