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01/05/2006 06:35:52 AM · #1
Hey Guys,

Just upgraded from a Fuji s5000 to an Olympus E-300. Took some pictures of my girlfriend for her modeling portfolio and was suitably impressed with my results.

Just really wanted you guys' opinions on them. Things I could do better, etc.

Photos are as follows..

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Message edited by author 2006-01-05 06:38:47.
01/05/2006 07:10:19 AM · #2
I like your soft lighting, but kinda wish you had a bit more light on the face. Maybe a reflector opposite the light?
01/05/2006 07:14:16 AM · #3
I like the photos a lot but I'm finding them a little too dark! I would prefer to see a little more light on her!
01/05/2006 07:34:42 AM · #4
I would have liked a little extra light however I wanted the black background and was shooting onto a blue surface and didn't want to do too much post-processing to remove the background. Possibly yes like idnic said a reflector on the opposite side wouldn't have changed the image too much but shed a little extra light on the right.
01/05/2006 08:10:22 AM · #5
I like them except for the fact that they are too dark.
01/05/2006 08:37:50 AM · #6
Yeah, like others have said, they are too dark. In none of them can I really see her well. I wouldn't abandon the shadowy feel, just bump up the ligting a little.
01/05/2006 08:51:56 AM · #7
3. This has great potential, as I like the pose very much but I feel that she should have pivoted to the right some, to capture at least half of her face in the light. Same exact pose with a 10 degree shift.
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