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08/07/2005 07:58:22 PM · #1 |
These are from a shoot I did last night. Any comments critiques would be much appreciated.
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08/07/2005 08:23:34 PM · #2 |
Looking good...the lighting seems a little off in the last two -- but that's just a matter of taste.
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08/07/2005 08:27:55 PM · #3 |
I think you have nailed it in the first photo. Subtle and sexy. FHM material... (Not that I am any expert on FHM... :))
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08/07/2005 08:43:52 PM · #4 |
| i totaly agree, you nailed it on the first one~! the lighting is a matter of taste though |
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08/07/2005 09:27:29 PM · #5 |
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08/07/2005 09:36:30 PM · #6 |
I would say the lighting was way off on all three. I'm an avaialable light photographer so I don't have any exact technical data, but I can tell you that adding some side lighting, using a difuser and taking the main flash off the top of the camera are things you might want to try, perhaps in combination.
Cute model.
Message edited by author 2005-08-07 22:20:52.
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08/07/2005 10:38:00 PM · #7 |
| I love the composition and the model...but I agree with the lighting! Just doesn't look right! Good effort though! |
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08/07/2005 10:47:30 PM · #8 |
Fisrt and third image posing is very good and she is very pretty, but the lighting and the focus seem off. As mentioned earlier by others, some experimenting with off camera lighting setups is in order for your next trial.
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08/08/2005 02:43:27 AM · #9 |
| On the first shot if you had put a highlight in her hair it might have looked nice. If you haven't already got a slave flash you should try it. I think you will find that if you do a sun sychro setup or something similiar you will get much more of a 3D effect. Nice posing. |
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08/08/2005 08:51:58 AM · #10 |
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08/08/2005 09:22:01 AM · #11 |
In the first one I thought that the bright spot was too bright, I would have diffused the light a little. But many other people liked the photo just how it is...so I guess it's just a matter of personal opinion on that one.
On the last one the lighting is very flat. It's looks more like a flash on the camera. I would have moved the light to the right side of the model and have a little more shadows on her.
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