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07/23/2018 12:00:20 AM · #1 |
| Post your outtakes from the Serpentine (DPL4 WK3) challenge here. |
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07/23/2018 12:50:10 AM · #2 |
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Outtake 
I am satisfied with finish on entry. Curious about the outtake which I decided was not serpentine enough. |
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07/23/2018 04:15:47 AM · #3 |
The colours of the sky in your outtake are lovely. But you're right, Nikki, it was not serpentine enough for my taste.
I gave your entry a 7, I would have given 6 for the outtake |
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07/23/2018 04:41:08 AM · #4 |
I was quite disappointed with the result on this one especially as I got up at 4am to take this shot:)
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07/23/2018 05:58:20 AM · #5 |
Originally posted by P-A-U-L:
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I think this one would have been better for the challenge. Both are good photos, but I feel the one you entered would have done better in a Free Study.
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07/23/2018 06:05:58 AM · #6 |
My pick would be the staircase. (I gave your entry 7.) |
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07/23/2018 07:01:15 AM · #7 |
I can't even. I had so many that I should have put in and didn't, changing last minute to something shoehorned and I paid for it. So while I know you'll say the outtakes would have been higher my question is which one would have been best?
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Outtakes that I'm still kicking myself over:
 (Note: I would have removed the border and slightly tweaked the edit)
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07/23/2018 07:11:15 AM · #8 |
Think I would have picked this one as its in your face serpentine shapes. I am not quite sure what the first of your outtakes is - 2 kids slides?
The one with the serpentine shapes in the street I like but as I have to scroll up and down to see the whole image it ruins the experience for me. |
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07/23/2018 07:27:49 AM · #9 |
My outtake:
What I entered (an admittedly rather uninspired shot):
I guess the outtake would have done better, if only because it couldn't have done much worse ;-) |
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07/23/2018 07:44:47 AM · #10 |
Originally posted by P-A-U-L:
I am not quite sure what the first of your outtakes is - 2 kids slides?
The one with the serpentine shapes in the street I like but as I have to scroll up and down to see the whole image it ruins the experience for me. |
Yes, the first is two slides. I really hate what this site does to vertical crops but at least in voting it would have been compressed so you can see the whole thing. To do that otherwise you need to right click and choose "View Image" |
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07/23/2018 07:53:37 AM · #11 |
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07/23/2018 08:51:22 AM · #12 |
That's a really great set of photos Giles.
I would have struggled to decide. Couple of picks but to be honest, there is little in it
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07/23/2018 09:55:00 AM · #13 |
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07/23/2018 10:07:04 AM · #14 |
| Actually, just a thought, I am commenting on the outtakes and entry's on the photos, would you prefer them on this thread instead. ((just thought about that ,,,eekks sorry)) |
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07/23/2018 10:14:40 AM · #15 |
Juliet - I really like this one but not sure it would have scored better than your most excellent entry
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07/23/2018 11:28:21 AM · #16 |
Originally posted by JakeKurdsjuk:
I can't even. I had so many that I should have put in and didn't, changing last minute to something shoehorned and I paid for it. So while I know you'll say the outtakes would have been higher my question is which one would have been best?
Outtakes that I'm still kicking myself over:
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This one would have scored at least two points and probably 3 higher from me. I think it's a great find and very well done.
And if this is a vertical image, I can't see anything but the horizontal, even with right click>view image . . . AND it looks great to me as a horizontal :)
Message edited by author 2018-07-23 11:30:42. |
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