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01/24/2003 08:36:30 PM · #1
Here is a portrait of one of my cats I took today. I don't do many portraints, and I really don't know a lot about portrait composition techniques, so please look at this photo and tell me what you like, things I could have done better, etc. Thanks :)

Brian


Canon Powershot G2 1/50 at 2.8 ISO 200

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01/24/2003 08:39:12 PM · #2
I don't like the diagonal lines in the background. I think this is a great photo other than that. But I'm picky. I don't know much about portraits so i'll leave it at that.
01/24/2003 08:43:09 PM · #3
I guess they dont really stand out to me, but I could see why you wouldnt like the railing. Snickers (the cats name ;) ) likes to sit at this window now and then, and I thought it was a great chance to try some animal portraits, since it's almost impossible to get them to sit still for anything other than a snapshot ;)

Brian
01/24/2003 08:48:39 PM · #4
Great shot. It just seems that the camera is focusing more on the nose of the cat and window rather then the whole face of the cat. You can tell this by looking at the upper part of the window and panning acrossed it from left to right and notice when it starts to go out of focus. Keep shooting. Is this the only shot you got of the cat. I like the mustache.
01/24/2003 09:14:02 PM · #5
I took maybe a dozen shots... it takes patience trying to wait for the cat to look just the right way. This was the best one though. There were a couple of others that were decent too.

I plan on getting portraits of all 3 of our cats, but Snickers is probably the most photogenic.
01/25/2003 03:36:08 AM · #6
I can clearly see that you have captured this cat's favorite pastime, the sharp focus on the cat's face and the windowscreen right in front of him say this loud and clear. The use of monochrome is in my opinion a good choice eliminates any distraction color would have in the background. I do not like the thin black line and drop shadow border, to me they muddy the division between the black of the cat and the background. Did you try a thin white border with the dropshadow, I would be intrested to see if that would improve the devision between picture and background.
01/25/2003 10:40:18 AM · #7
Getting a cat in the right 'pose' and 'position' for a portrait is difficult. This is an excellent shot, however. I like the black and white choice. The background in your shot doesn't bother me at all.. I think the screen adds an interesting element to that background with the texture and shallow depth of field.

If you want to experiement with a different type of background, watch your cat for a few days and see where he likes to 'perch'. My cat likes a partiular lamp table that I have here, so most of my cat portrait attempts have been on that table....

Meet Potter


01/25/2003 12:19:54 PM · #8
I have a "stealth dog" who is also hard to photograph. The auto focus on the camera doesn't see him at all. It goes around looking for something with a pattern to focus on. Invariable it gets the background and not the dog. Looks like the same story with your 'Stealth" cat. Try manual vocus or locking the focus.
01/25/2003 12:49:29 PM · #9
emorgan49: Actually, I was using manual focus. It was a lot easier than trying to get the camera to actually lock on to something. With manual, all I had to do was make sure the cat didnt get any further or closer from the camera, and press the button when I got a nice "pose". The cats face looks pretty sharp to me though...

setzler: Potter looks like a sweet cat :)

Thanks for the comments everyone!

Brian
01/25/2003 03:43:13 PM · #10
Originally posted by Sonifo:

Great shot. It just seems that the camera is focusing more on the nose of the cat and window rather then the whole face of the cat. You can tell this by looking at the upper part of the window and panning acrossed it from left to right and notice when it starts to go out of focus.


I have to agree. I found the background distracting on the left. Nice sharp focus on whiskers.
01/26/2003 09:29:48 AM · #11
Hi Brian,
I think this is in focus every where it needs to be and the composition is good. I noticed on your shot data you had the ISO at 200. I have found that I get much cleaner images (less image noise/grain) with the ISO at 50. Check page 83 of the camera users guide for a more detailed explaination.

Peter
01/26/2003 10:04:08 AM · #12
I liked the image of your cat. John's cat looked like the negative of your cat - black on white versus white on black - fun.

You have heard the key comment about the background elements and it is understandable that it may be a challenge to photograph the cat without them. You could remove the background in Photoshop and place an alternate, complimentary background in place of the stairs to enhance the image and to further isolation of the cat. At this close proximity to the cat, a small aperture is essential if the available natural light permits it, maybe f11, or smaller, in order to deepen the depth of field. A fill flash may be required. Although, a flash would likely frighten a cat. My dogs growl at my flash.

The best recommendation that I heard was for patience and to pursue knowledge about your cat's habits in order to better capture the perfect image, it all makes sense to me too. I will try this same approach to photography my dogs and my wife. They are equally difficult to photograph and all work hard to stay away from the front of my lens. {LOL} Thank you for sharing this image, it is good work.
01/26/2003 10:52:41 PM · #13
some of those comments are just lame... Its no wonder there are so many bad pictures every week, no one seems to look at a picture for what its worth... "bad focus" yeah right, focus is amazing, framing is great, backgroud is EXCEPTIONAL... contrast is amazing...
THIS is a photograph, it captures the mood VERY well...
GREAT PHOTO

Message edited by author 2003-01-26 22:52:50.
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