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10/09/2012 05:40:19 PM · #1


looking for some feedback on this shot

be as harsh as you like im a big boy
10/09/2012 05:48:26 PM · #2
I gave you a 5.

Not so bad, but it's underexposed, I don't like very much the composition and the shadow and it doesn't 'tell a story'.

Maybe better than the score you got, but not a 6+.
10/09/2012 07:13:11 PM · #3
I gave it a 5 also. I thought it was a little soft...plus the shadow didn't do anything to enhance the photo. Maybe a tighter crop would have helped. I do like the tones though...sort of a light hint of sepia..
10/09/2012 07:13:29 PM · #4
I liked the shot but would have preferred if it were cropped closer to the head, and maybe a little more detail as to what he is holding in his hand to give the viewer, in this case - me, a connect to the "story".

10/09/2012 10:39:41 PM · #5
I gave you a 5. I love the dof/blur, but the composition is a bit stiff and undynamic.
10/09/2012 10:43:39 PM · #6
6 from me... I like the softness and dark presentation. Not as engaging as some.
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