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03/31/2008 11:23:40 PM · #1 |
what do you mean by "flat"? I didn't edit the last two, just resized them.Originally posted by Jib:
images seem kind of flat what did you edit these with? |
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03/31/2008 11:22:33 PM · #2 |
thank you very much for pointing that out, I didn't even realize it!Originally posted by Nocturnal_Delusion:
My favorite were the 2 that you have posted, the facial expressions in 1 and 4 were throwing me off.
Your second choice has a hard shadow from her nose on her cheek and looks slightly more awkward, so I choose "copy2offave3". That said I'd still try and recover as much detail from the right half as I could in PP.
All around nice, I like the use of many angles, next time try and soften up the light a little. |
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03/31/2008 11:20:53 PM · #3 |
| images seem kind of flat what did you edit these with? |
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03/31/2008 11:14:48 PM · #4 |
definitely #1 from four choices that you originally gave.
Message edited by author 2008-03-31 23:15:38. |
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03/31/2008 11:12:14 PM · #5 |
My favorite were the 2 that you have posted, the facial expressions in 1 and 4 were throwing me off.
Your second choice has a hard shadow from her nose on her cheek and looks slightly more awkward, so I choose "copy2offave3". That said I'd still try and recover as much detail from the right half as I could in PP.
All around nice, I like the use of many angles, next time try and soften up the light a little. |
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03/31/2008 11:07:57 PM · #6 |
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03/31/2008 10:55:11 PM · #7 |
so I have it narrowed down to two...and here is the unedited versions...which one do you favor?
1. //i8.photobucket.com/albums/a32/leadham/Copy2offave3.jpg
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//i8.photobucket.com/albums/a32/leadham/kaelyn.jpg
Message edited by author 2008-03-31 22:55:51.
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03/31/2008 09:28:17 PM · #8 |
Hi David... it really depends on what you are going to do with the pic. None of them stands out more than the others - without knowing what you're looking for. Is it for a website, her MySpace, a CD, etc ?
That said:
#1 says "tough rocker chick in a band"
#2 says "mellow, pretty girl playing a ballad"
#3 says "Alanis Morissette"
#4 says "skilled thrasher metal guitarist doing lightning-fast scales"
Ofcourse... that's just what they say to me. |
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03/31/2008 09:26:17 PM · #9 |
The harsh highlight bother me on all of these. What was your lighting? Some gentle natural light from a window, with a reflector if needed, might be a better way to light this subject.
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03/31/2008 09:20:46 PM · #10 |
Note that your image numbers, and your number schemes are opposite (i.e. image #1 is Copyofffave4). I'll be referring to the image number, not it's name.
I think image #3 is too blown out and unflattering.
Image #2 has a pleasant cordialness to it.
Image #1 has the best composition (I think) with the angled of the shot.
Image #4 has a similar angle without quite the same dynamic due to the guitar being straight and also cut off.
All of that said ... I think #1 would have been my favorite, if it were for the fact that it, too, is a bit "blown" in the highlights. That leaves #2, for me, as the most pleasant to look at. Here I think the girl is both pretty and relaxed and you get a sense of what is going on.
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03/31/2008 09:20:43 PM · #11 |
thank you very much, now which one do you like best!!?Originally posted by dwterry:
Fixed links. (I would have fixed them to images, but the images are too big for forum posting) |
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03/31/2008 09:16:12 PM · #12 |
Fixed links. (I would have fixed them to images, but the images are too big for forum posting)
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03/31/2008 09:01:34 PM · #13 |
I am very indecisive and can't choose a favorite. which one do you like most and why??
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