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 10/18/2019 10:10:15 AM · #1
Originally posted by Tiberius:
@ GeorgesBogaert Lighting the cigarette and some smoke would have been even better. For both versions. I gave it a 7. I like the entry most


I wanted to create a smoky place but the smoke detectors in my office would start ringing and in no time activating water sprinklers.
Peter (our teacher) is actually a real smoker.
I used 3 cellphone light sources in an absolutely dark room to create the shadows on the face and wall. I made (1 hour work) an old looking radio as background filler
 10/17/2019 09:23:47 PM · #2
The entry!
Originally posted by mariuca:
entry



outtake

10/17/2019 09:21:08 PM · #3
@ GeorgesBogaert Lighting the cigarette and some smoke would have been even better. For both versions. I gave it a 7. I like the entry most

Message edited by author 2019-10-17 21:23:20.
 10/17/2019 01:28:09 PM · #4
Originally posted by GeorgesBogaert:
Not unhappy with my entry, but wonder if one of the outtakes could have scored higher

Outtakes

Not sure if it would have scored higher, but I think this one looks more "obviously" like a clip from a noir film because of the (implied) action.

ETA: If I was editing it I'd try adding a graduated tone curve to the window area to make it look like it was night with a streetlamp shining into the room (probably from the upper-left).

Message edited by author 2019-10-17 13:30:22.
 10/17/2019 01:09:44 PM · #5
entry



outtake

10/17/2019 12:10:52 PM · #6
Entry


Not unhappy with my entry, but wonder if one of the outtakes could have scored higher

Outtakes


10/16/2019 12:00:12 AM · #7
Post your outtakes from the Film Noir III challenge here.
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