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03/11/2004 02:57:37 PM · #1 |
I missed the submission deadline, but was thinking of entering the following. Can you let me know if it would have been worth a shot? I wasn't 100% sure on Sunday that this was worth submitting, so I'd like some thoughts. Thanks!
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03/11/2004 03:54:41 PM · #2 |
I find the shot to be technically correct. The propeller's diagonal line contrasts the others lines quite well. The blue and yellow lighting is nice also.
I do find to photo's composition to be a bit too centered considering the asymetrical aspect of the other lines in the shot. It seems off balanced a bit.
All in all an above average shot... prolly a 7 from me. :-)
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03/11/2004 04:12:22 PM · #3 |
| I like it, though I do find the negative space upper portion to be a bit disconcerting here as well as the hot spot on the upper part of the prop center; To me it would have been improved if the symmetry were complete here, for example, I would have loved to see the pattern in the bottom right all throughout (just giving an example--I realize the frame bars aren't there to shoot!). Would have probably given it 6 as is. |
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03/16/2004 03:07:21 AM · #4 |
I really like the play of color and the textures, but do find that one hot spot a bit distracting.
Any thoughts on this
Substation?
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03/16/2004 06:35:26 AM · #5 |
Originally posted by GeneralE:
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Any thoughts on this
Substation?
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There`s a lot going on here Paul. Plenty of potential for several different styles of image.
For me, in this particular viewpoint,there`s too much competing for your attention and straight away,the handrail would have to go.
I was going to say change the viewpoint to get rid of the houses, but I think they make a good contrast to the substation and I would probably centre the theme on the connection between the two..just a matter of looking for the best viewpoint incorporating them both.
Then again...it looks heaven sent for "Parallel lines".
I`ll be on the next flight from Glasgow" :-)
Gordon
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