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by ahaze

Comment by messerschmitt:
the models are pretty and the image is nice
too bad about that 'screaming' title lay-out

checked it on my own computer
maybe it isnt that bad after all the title lay-out
would not be surprised if this is a Elsapo production (where the beauties seem to line up for him to take an image :)
bump

S U P E R N A T U R A L
by ahaze

Comment by just-married:
Very well lit. I'd like a touch more space below the lowest earring. I could also use a breath of space above the first girl's hair. If they're meant to be sisters (they do bear a resemblence) then the sexuality is a turnoff and offensive to me. If they're meant to be lovers, I think it's a very nice shot.

S U P E R N A T U R A L
by ahaze

Comment by Man_Called_Horse:
interesting post for theme, nice light, skin tones a touch too red, b&w's good, good pix

S U P E R N A T U R A L
by ahaze

Comment by tsheets:
nice lighting overall, maybe a touch more hair light would be nice. Skin tones seem to have a pink cast to them.

S U P E R N A T U R A L
by ahaze

Comment by ConcreteDonkey:
Love it ... 10

Would it be out of line to ask for her number. lol ... Probly so i wont ask.

Good work

S U P E R N A T U R A L
by ahaze

Comment by jmoore:
The challenge was to use light in a creative way that makes if a key element. While light is always key, I don't feel like you used it in a creative way and I don't even feel like this is lit as well as it could be. I do think that the facial expressions and posing is very good, but I think your light source is to low and lighting up at the girls. Had you brought your souce up more I think the shadows on the faces would be more appealing. Please don't take this the wrong way because the lighting is decent, but I think it could be improved.

S U P E R N A T U R A L
by ahaze

Comment by dwterry:
I think you got the wrong challenge... don't these ladies belong in BEAUTY?!? Simply Gorgeous!

As for this image in this challenge... I was hoping to see light (or variations of light) play a bigger role. And while I agree these gals are well lit, there isn't much in the way of "lighting as a key element" to the picture.

One more thing, on a pose like this ... have them pull their heads apart just slightly so that they don't actually touch. I think you'll find that it improves each one by providing slight separation and by avoiding deforming their facial features.

I'm scoring a 7 for now. I may be back later to bump it up depending on what everyone else is doing for lighting. Good luck in the challenge!

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by ahaze

Comment by arngrimur:
Naughty and nice.
Very good lighting, beautiful models and a nice bokeh.
Grrrrrrr

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Comment by The Eskimo:
Pretty models. Really like the lighting.

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Comment by hughletheren:
This is an unusual double portrait, very compelling. The different heights enhance the composition and the intensity of the expressions works very well