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09/12/2006 02:05:49 PM
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Comment by atupdate:
Hello from the Critique Club.

On technical merits, there is nothing I can suggest to improve this image. The silhouette is well defined, sharply focused, and the lighting behind the flower is very creative and pleasing. I do agree with the one commenter that the black around the edges appears to be a little excessive. I do think that the black is necessary for this image and should not be cropped too tightly, as it provides an anchor for your wonderful lighting affect. However, as presented it tends to overpower the silhouette of the flower.

Feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.

Tim
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09/04/2006 05:59:34 PM
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Comment by rushartistry:
Great image! Everything in the image points to the theme. Well composed!
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09/04/2006 03:20:23 PM
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Comment by ambaker:
Critique Club Review:

Overall a very good photograph. Lighting, contrast, saturation are all done well. Detail is only lost at the very tip of a couple of the flower's leaves. Still only minor. In another challenge this picture would have scored much better. As it is, the challenge was "soft focus", you used depth of field to isolate your subject quite well. The idea of soft focus, is that the subject of the picture has a soft focus. Your technique is very good, it just didn't meet the challenge.
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09/02/2006 05:14:58 PM
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Comment by Photologist:
I love the colors. However, a little cropping so that the flower wasn't in the center (maybe a bit to the left) would have raised my vote.
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08/31/2006 08:39:57 PM
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Comment by theyetifanclub:
Very good! I like that this was taken at sunset, some of the mid-day ones look a little cheesy. This is simply excellent. I love how clear it is too, I see talent! (Cough Cough ribbonwinner Cough)
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08/31/2006 01:07:52 PM
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Comment by SquishyB:
I think I would have trimmed out some of the excess black around the edges.
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08/31/2006 09:29:57 AM
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Comment by hokie:
5
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08/30/2006 08:36:14 PM
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Comment by UNTITLED:
Simple, but still very dramatic. Great job!
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08/30/2006 10:36:08 AM
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Comment by Gunnsi:
Must end up in 1st or 2nd place. Beautiful silhouette with these soft colours in the background.
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08/30/2006 09:22:01 AM
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Comment by stanm2:
nice
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