Sisters
by enajj

Comment by nickersh2o:
A little out of focus but other than that good pic :D

Sisters
by enajj

Comment by albc28:
Could use a little more focus

Shh, Don't Tell
by enajj

Comment by RichMiller:
Very well thought out picture. No distractions, everything in the picture works together. Overall great lighting, the hand seems a bit light to me.

Shh, Don't Tell
by enajj

Comment by Wallit:
The reflection is a little distracting to me. It was a nice idea for a studio type setting. But given the subject, I think a kitchen scene would have been appropriate. I still like it though.

Shh, Don't Tell
by enajj

Comment by hotpasta:
excellent lighting

Shh, Don't Tell
by enajj

Comment by HeiSch:
very solid execution

Shh, Don't Tell
by enajj

Comment by F-StopBlues:
Good concept but the grass reflecting on the right side of the jar distracts from the photo IMO

Shh, Don't Tell
by enajj

Comment by littlegett:
does not work as a crime scene for me. There is nothing here.

Beautiful Beatnik
by enajj

Comment by SRINI:
The sharp features are captured nicely. The quintessential of female portraiture - angles, curves, expression, ornaments/accessories?, mood, fashion - all captured. May be the right side of the subject shd hv been a little more hidden in darkness to enhance the mystery of the female aura.

(oops! when i look below at what the experts say in the comments, I guess I am saying the opposite - they are calling for more light on the right! But then I am no photographer - so I am leaving my honest opinion as is for whatever it is worth.)

Congratulations on your maiden attempt. I guess you wd strike it rich sometime soon!

Beautiful Beatnik
by enajj

Comment by colorcarnival:
Wow, great job for your first photo here at DPC! And you've only been doing this for a few months so I am jealous. :) The background does not bother me but like others said, you do need some softer light on the left. Great pose and clarity of the photo. And fun outfit too. Good luck on future challenges!