Corporate Greed
by enajj

Comment by Jaker:
Very cool shot! Would have worked for several of the topics. Hope you saved some for urban landscapes! :-)

Shh, Don't Tell
by enajj

Comment by SRINI:

Originally posted by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE by karmat Compositionally, the diagonal you establish betwee the lid and the hand is good. It gives a definitive "line" to the shot, and adds a bit of interest or action to it. That said, the straight on perspective makes the shot seem a bit static. The lower perspective is better, I think, than one that is even, but perhaps if it were "turned" some, more dof could be defined, and it would have more depth to it. Also, it feel a bit tilted to the right to me. Technically, you have done well with exposing the glass correctly. That can be difficult. the hand and the lid, though, appear to be just a touch off. That makes the shot have the impression that it is out of focus, because the two "anchor" points are not crisp. Overall, it feels like a touch more contrast would also help it to be a bit more dynamic. Overall, I think you did meet the challenge, though arguably, stealing a cookie isn't a crime (unless you are shoplifting it), but the idea was good, and it was kinda nice to not see all blood, gore and violence. Good work and best to you in future challenges. Karma

It is nice to see such detailed analysis. That wd encourage the youngster to keep doing better. Tnx.

Corporate Greed
by enajj

Comment by Camabs:
quite nice, a bit dark though.

Corporate Greed
by enajj

Comment by Naval_Photographer:
Nice perspective.

Corporate Greed
by enajj

Comment by Maggye:
nice effort, but there is something about it that doesn't do it for me

Corporate Greed
by enajj

Comment by gwe21:
good concept for greed!

Shh, Don't Tell
by enajj

Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Compositionally, the diagonal you establish betwee the lid and the hand is good. It gives a definitive "line" to the shot, and adds a bit of interest or action to it. That said, the straight on perspective makes the shot seem a bit static. The lower perspective is better, I think, than one that is even, but perhaps if it were "turned" some, more dof could be defined, and it would have more depth to it. Also, it feel a bit tilted to the right to me.

Technically, you have done well with exposing the glass correctly. That can be difficult. the hand and the lid, though, appear to be just a touch off. That makes the shot have the impression that it is out of focus, because the two "anchor" points are not crisp. Overall, it feels like a touch more contrast would also help it to be a bit more dynamic.

Overall, I think you did meet the challenge, though arguably, stealing a cookie isn't a crime (unless you are shoplifting it), but the idea was good, and it was kinda nice to not see all blood, gore and violence.

Good work and best to you in future challenges.

Karma

Shh, Don't Tell
by enajj

Comment by SRINI:
They say "caught red handed". Here the grass reflection gives the had a green shade! But I like the concept and the humor behind the shot. Goes to my fav!

Corporate Greed
by enajj

Comment by anounou88:
i like this shot. nice lighting.

Corporate Greed
by enajj

Comment by Charlene:
Absolutely and well done.