don't be so square
by khamael

Comment by pichichib:
Awesome picture, she is so sexy..

Incandescence
by khamael

Comment by sadiebird:
like the green 7

Incandescence
by khamael

Comment by Sterling87:
I would have liked a slightly deeper DOF so that the whole shape of the lightbulb is sharp, including the interior element

Incandescence
by khamael

Comment by Ja-9:
really like the tone and color that you chose

Incandescence
by khamael

Comment by BJokerud:
Great coloring! Even more spiderweb would probably add more feeling to it, but it is great as it is

Incandescence
by khamael

Comment by DrOmega:
I like the photo, particularly the colour. The DoF does not include the base of the bulb which is a shame. On a Scientific not the title frustrated me as there is no incandescence in the photo - the only light is from the florescence!

Incandescence
by khamael

Comment by neophyte:
The duotone really is effective here as well as the comp. Nice work.

Incandescence
by khamael

Comment by sarampo:
Very vintage look, added by the cyanotype effect. Nice placing and focus.

back lighting
by khamael

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Unfortunately, this capture is really lacking from a technical standpoint. I do like the idea, and I LOVE naked women, but I think that the focus is a bit too hard to find. That coupled with the overly warm red tones of the image leaves this one a bit short of strong execution.

Lighting: Interesting, but just not a strength. Its really hard to say what would have helped you achieved the lighting that you were after in this one. Perhaps some fill flash, not much, then a little bit quicker of a shutter speed.

Composition/Content: I like the content, and I like the idea. I think that the composition would have fit this one well if the execution of the shot had been stronger.

My Opinion: Nice play on words, but you missed the challenge by a mile. It specifically called for an image that used lighting from behind your subject, meaning that your subject was between you and your primary lighting. Even still, I like the idea. I think that this one was scored pretty accurately.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric

back lighting
by khamael

Comment by khamael:
Thanks for all the nice comments! Unfortunately the execution didn't go as I wished... just had a bit of time to try the concept out and this photo was the best one that came out. It's not nice for the model to be being burned by the lights while I was worried about the light and the composition and those things :P
I wanted to make another session but no time :/

But well... it was fun :)