Human Portrait
by khamael

Comment by Purplerose:
I think this would have been better with just the front model, her pose is beautiful Having both people in the image makes this feel cluttered.

Human Portrait
by khamael

Comment by Devinder:
this is simple, but so alluring. Good stuff

Human Portrait
by khamael

Comment by Mike:
so much to like here.

doll
by khamael

Comment by Paul:
Greeting from the Critique Club:

Well, if you are going to shoot between neck and knee it would be a shape not to shoot this! It is a very interesting bikini after all ;-)

I like how this is suggestive of a Bond movie and I also like how the play of shadows on her skin creates interesting lines - like the way we can see she is wearing sun glasses.

Body and bikini aside - I think we need to ask what added value your photographic choices made.... the most eclectic choice you made was the lateral crop - was this the full frame? I actually think this is a good choice but it may not be for everyone.

I think the coloration is bang on, it creates a feel-good sunny impression.

If I had one criticism it would be the story - or lack of it; your close crop constrains our view... I wonder how this would look in landscape orientation with more to her left and right; the inclusion of some environment context is often goos for story telling; of course you may have just spared us more sea!

Paul

doll
by khamael

Comment by kenskid:
Dude !

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by khamael

Comment by Tiny:
A very nice body you have captured there.

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by khamael

Comment by jayzundel:
Lots of shadows, great model

doll
by khamael

Comment by PenelopeK:
I like how natural this pose is/looks. I also like the position and the cropping of the hands. I think that really adds something to the composition.

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by khamael

Comment by Tacoma28:
a lot of weird shadows

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by khamael

Comment by sir_bazz:
Strong visual interest for me. :)